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anonim_4396
a întrebat:
Imi puteti corecta si mie aceasta scrisoare? Mersi mult!
Dear Evans,
Thank you for the last letter.I hope you stay well with your health
and i`m sure you bought that red car that you want!
My life changed in a good way(is more easier), because now I know
english much better than before thanks to you and your wife. That helps me on
my exams and my teacher saw the difference. With my personal life I`m very good
and all goes well.
My parents are also happy even if at first they wouldn`t let me come
in this trip.My sister told me yesterday that she want`s really much to come
you but my parent doesen`t let her because she is too young.
In the near future I hope to come back on your family. Say hello to
your baby, it`s a great kid and you deserve it!
Ordonare:
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UnOmGanditor
a răspuns:
Gramatical vorbind ai o singura greseala [hat she want`s really] se scrie want fara 's.
Răspunde
)))))))
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andreeacmocanu
a răspuns:
Dude, nu vreau sa te ofensez cu nimic, dar tocamai ai asasinat limba engleza in cel mai tragic mod, ai tradus fiecare cuvant mot-a-mot, o mare greseala, nu respecti structura unei scrisori. Nu sunt as la engleza, dar ce ai scris tu aici este tragic.
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vitaminaXyZ16
a răspuns:
In primul rand am pastrat structura unei scrisori, dar ca am facut-o in word si am dat paste direct aici si nu a facut-o bine!
si stai linistit ca aici i doar o varianta ce trebuie corectata
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