anonim_4396
| anonim_4396 a întrebat:

am avut de facut la scoala o compunere in engleza despre cel mai bun preiten ( o compunere descriptiva), eu nu am asa ceva asa ca am facut urmatoare compunere, nu e prea corecta si as vrea sa ma corectati sau sa mai adaugati vreo idee daca aveti. mersi! happy

"My best friend?"
To find a true friendship is one of the hardly thing. I think a really best friend doesn`t exist. All people have good and bad qualities so it is imposible to have a best friend. For a true friendship is necessary to be amiable, devoted and trustful. However much you have a very goog relation with a person who you call "best friend", sooner or later this person will let you down...

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| thegatekeeper a răspuns:

Nu "hardly", ci "hardest".
In loc de "for a true friendship is necessary" - "for a true friendship it is necessary".
In loc de "However[...]" poti folosi "No matter how good a realtion with a person is, I think sooner or later this person will let you down".

| DeeaMarry a răspuns:

Nici eu nu ma pot considera experta, insa iti pot spune ce greseli am remarcat.
Nu 'hardly thing' ci 'hardest things'.
Nu 'however much...'.Eu cred ca merge mai bine ' No matter how much time you have been having a very good relationship with a person called "best friend". Sooner or later this person may let you down.'
Sper ca te-am ajutatwinking