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Ma corectati va rog : After arrived home from school, Mary has done her homework, ate and went together with her friend Alina to play.Was the last day in which the girls could play because Alina had to go to visit her grandma' in Paris for a week.Alina left her cat, Tom, in care of Mary.Maria played with Tom, fed it but in a moment of innatention, Tom came out of the gate and ran.Mary sought it everywhere because she knew how much Alina loves it, but didn't find it.Alina came back home. Eventually, Mary told Alina what happend, apologized but Alina was very upsed that she was not spoken to Mary.Because of hungry Tom returned home. When Mary saw it, took it in her arms and ran to Alina.Alina was very happy when she saw it and Mary apologized again.After, both settle down on the bank, embaraced. Beside them, on the bench have been tom cat and one mouse.

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Pe bune?
eu zic ca nu ii bine sa te corectam noi! mai bine daca crezi ca ai scris gresit sa spui unei profesoare nu noua!