| Denisuk123 a întrebat:

Heii TPU am compus o melodie vreau pareri :*:
If only know someone
If only, If only,
We know I feel now?
He's not even happy or sadness or anything
Just do not know.
How I feel now
Refren:
Only best friend,
They know when you're sad,
Even if you hide,
Always will know!
2- Powerless lifted me up
I look forward on beautiful
It's another day,
To be, to fight, I struggle
And not remaind on the road
I have friends, family, friends,
What cand you up,
When you feelthat fail
'(' Din nou refrenul.")
And fall slowly, slowly
In another trap...
But I give up,
When I know that my life,
And give each a slap!
( si din nou refrenul de 2 ori ) laughing :*
Vreau pareri! :* funda la cea mai sincera parere:*

6 răspunsuri:
| AlexL28 a răspuns:

Versuri in regula, prea scurta, prea comerciala, sincer happy

| BTWIN a răspuns:

E groaznica...n-are logica si coerenta.eu zic sa te joci cu papusele si sa tai cablul de net sa nu te mai faci de ras pe aici

| Denisuk123 explică:

Nu e compusa de mine 4victory daca nu stii nu te baga ok?

| Denisuk123 explică:

Am scris in intrebare : '' am compus o melodie'' ca sa nu ma lungesc rolling on the floor

| Denisuk123 explică:

Alex L28 doar atat mi-a trimis pe fb aia rolling on the floor) a zis ca mai are de lucratrolling on the floor

| AlexL28 a răspuns (pentru Denisuk123):

Ok, dar are si cateva greseli...